Amanda, Whoa, your poem is something else. Not only does it elaborate on itself, it almost seems to be drawing a picture, quite literally. Truly you spent a good amount of time on this. It is a little difficult to follow at first. However, it is certainly a poem that "speaks" to its reader. -Danielle
Wow this is really cool. I love how you made this poem actually look like it came from the common core which is interesting, It's like you physically picked up the components and mixed them around to make your art.
This is crazy cool. I like the direction you took this and the organization you took. Is the format supposed to spell out anything. Part of it looks like an S. hmm.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteWhoa, your poem is something else. Not only does it elaborate on itself, it almost seems to be drawing a picture, quite literally. Truly you spent a good amount of time on this. It is a little difficult to follow at first. However, it is certainly a poem that "speaks" to its reader.
-Danielle
Wow this is really cool. I love how you made this poem actually look like it came from the common core which is interesting, It's like you physically picked up the components and mixed them around to make your art.
ReplyDeleteThis is crazy cool. I like the direction you took this and the organization you took. Is the format supposed to spell out anything. Part of it looks like an S. hmm.
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